Friday, May 17, 2013

Planning


Storyline:
Woman goes to a PI's office. She is a waitress who has a job in a seedy bar. Her rich boss has been killed and the safe emptied. She is actually the one who killed him for the money. She makes up that the man had a scar on his face.
She hires the PI and uses her sexuality to mislead him that someone else had killed the boss, hoping to throw the police and the PI off her track. 
In the end the PI sees through it and sadly has to bring her in.

Intro:
Woman goes to the PI's officeShe asks for help as her boss has been killed, and the money has been stolen. Tells him her story - she's a waitress in a seedy bar. She says that she's the one that found the body, and asks him to help her discover who the murderer is. 
 
 
Shot list: 
  • High heels walking along a hallway - big shadow on the wall
  • Back to heels 
  • Flashback to the body
  • Back to heels walking - move up body
  • Flashback to the empty safe
  • Back to her walking into the PI office - puts bag down
  • Shot over the detectives shoulder at a file he's looking at - he closes it and looks up
  • She sits down - not showing her face
  • They start talking - she asks for his help
  • Flashback to her working in the bar
  • He accepts the case
  • She hands him envelope - money 
  • And starts right away
  • Flashback to heels walking away from body and she picks the bag up - implied that it was her
 
Prop list:
  • High heels
  • Detective coat
  • Detective hat
  • Dress
  • Bag and its contents
  • Gun
  • Hat
  • Files
  • Envelope
  • Boxes

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