Group Feedback

Group 1 – Holly, Jazmin, Nikky, Montana:

·      Story made sense

·      A bit too horror

·      Shots/cinematography was good at the start but the camera started to get a bit shaky in later shots

·      The use of uniforms wasn’t too good at the end – could’ve used different costumes

·      The lighting could have been better

·      Flashback wasn’t very clear

·      Good acting

·      Low and high angles

·      Editing wasn’t amazing

·      Props were good

Group 2 – Julian, Isabella, Lauren, Shae

·      Story boarding could have been better

·      Clock was a good shot

·      A good use of rule of thirds

·      A bit shaky in parts

·      Good unfocused shots

·      Locations were good

·      Clear storyline

Group 3 – Charlie, Madi, Georgia, Sofia

·      Costumes could have been better

·      Shaky shots

·      Locations were very similar

·      Storyline was a bit confusing/odd

·      Sound effects were cool

·      Didn’t use lighting

·      Unreal – acting

Group 4 – Georgina, Ilona, Christie, Hannah

·      Good storyline

·      A bit shaky

·      Interview and murder happened in the same place

·      Lighting could’ve been better in some parts

·      Storyline could have been clarified a bit

·      Flash backs were confusing